2015年8月7日金曜日

book review1

'OK! Come on!' says Captain Haddock.
The ship is big and dark. 
'His name is Haddock,' thinks Tintin.
 'The captain of the Unicorn is Haddock too.'


Tintin got the clue of treasure and is trying to find the old ship named Unicorn. According to the clue, the ship's captain's name is Francis Haddock. Then,Tintin saw the man on the dark and horrible ship. He is the captain of the ship. To his surprise, his name is Haddock too!

For Tintin, I think, seeing the captain is destiny. I'm sure that his presence takes Tintin to the Unicorn. I'm very excited to their future. I'm looking forward to finding the Unicorn and getting treasure.

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  1. Rick2015年8月9日 8:12

    Then,Tintin saw the man at the dark and horrible ship. >
    Then, Tintin saw the man on the dark and horrible ship.

    the existance of him >
    his presence/existence

    the existance of him take Tintin to the Unicorn
    https://rickresearchwriting.wordpress.com/2013/07/18/3rd-person-singular-verbs/

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